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Bad Spelling:
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ok..
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It's just the wrong adjective... you don't use "massive" or "huge" to describe lines and queues. (unless it's a "huge" line of credit, but that's something different.) They are "long" lines.
<p>But you're not gonna change it anyway, because that's what you've been kept doing: you changed the title, which is okay if you are not deliberate trying to put a positive spin on Sony and negative spin on everyone else, and steer people into thinking the way you want them to think with your title. |
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Bad Editing:
(839 days 20 hours ago ) Fixed 839 days 20 hours ago
Massive ? Huge ? Big difference ?
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Bad Editing:
(839 days 20 hours ago ) Fixed 839 days 20 hours ago
"massive" line?
<p>and you <u><b>completely&l t;/b></u> changed the title and the meaning of the title, again. |
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Bad Editing:
(839 days 20 hours ago ) Fixed 839 days 20 hours ago
Repeated sentence =|
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