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Bad Editing:
(870 days 5 hours ago ) Fixed 870 days 5 hours ago
remove (Thanks to moronic reviewer) from title.
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Bad Editing:
(870 days 6 hours ago ) Fixed 870 days 6 hours ago
"...I certainly have…
Imagine my horror then, when this morning I heard that the Official Xbox Magazine gave the title a particularly poor 2/10." Keep it objective, third person. Or put it inside quotation markers and end it with mentioning who said it.
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