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Duplicate Story:
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Other:
(868 days 13 hours ago )
At least put a comma after Yoshihara. That's the proper way to use non-restrictive appositives.
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Bad Editing:
(868 days 13 hours ago ) Fixed 868 days 13 hours ago
Hot Japanese models, Kana Tsugihara and Natsuki Yoshihara, promote DOA Xtreme 2.
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