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Bad Editing:
(942 days 23 hours ago )
Clean up the first sentence and maybe just mention a few highlights from the review rather than copying half the review..
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Bad Editing:
(943 days ago )
WAY TO LONG...
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Other:
(943 days ago )
others, as borrowed...
must i read more????? english please!
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Bad Editing:
(943 days ago )
summary too long and it is confusing from the start... but it gets my approval
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