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daydream (1) - 942d 23h ago
drtysouf21 (1) - 942d 23h ago
Lord Anubis (1) - 942d 23h ago
BubblesDAVERAGE (1) - 943d ago
timmyp53 (1) - 943d ago
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Updates: (942 days 13 hours ago )
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Bad Editing: (942 days 23 hours ago )
Clean up the first sentence and maybe just mention a few highlights from the review rather than copying half the review..
Reported by: sa73917
Bad Editing: (943 days ago )
WAY TO LONG...
Reported by: Brad_2008
Other: (943 days ago )
others, as borrowed...

must i read more????? english please!
Reported by: Brad_2008
Bad Editing: (943 days ago )
summary too long and it is confusing from the start... but it gets my approval
Reported by: timmyp53