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Bad Editing:
(941 days 17 hours ago )
"With updated graphics to go with the
Tomb Raider:Legend inspired game play this game is looking to become..."--this needs to be edited for clarity. Commas, where appropriate, are recommended.
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Bad Editing:
(941 days 20 hours ago )
I'll approve but do what kingofps3 said
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Bad Editing:
(941 days 20 hours ago )
"and new players to the tombs we have grown to love." (Be in Third person) Also, in my opinion, there some bad editing here.
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