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Bad Editing:
(295 days 9 hours ago ) Fixed 295 days 9 hours ago
PlayStation Eye not Playstation Eye
No comma needed after But
aspects of it that do and the ... should all be one sentence ending at 'them'. 'Here' should start a new sentence.
I know it is a direct quote so a: should we clean it up and give them the exposure or should we kill it since the site can't be bothered with basic grammar and sentence structure?
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