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Updates: (490 days 12 hours ago )
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Bad Spelling: (489 days 21 hours ago )
The grammar used in the description is HORRIBLE.
Please improve your English writing skills.
Reported by: SUP3R
Bad Editing: (490 days 8 hours ago )
"yes we was disappointed" should be "yes we were"
Reported by: Yipee Bog
Fake: (490 days 10 hours ago )
Site has no source as to back up its claim.
Reported by: FantasyStar
Bad Editing: (490 days 12 hours ago ) Fixed 490 days 12 hours ago
see below
Reported by: pharmd
Bad Editing: (490 days 12 hours ago ) Fixed 490 days 12 hours ago
We? Sort the use of personal pronouns by citing.
Reported by: Snoozer282