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Bad Editing: (486 days 9 hours ago ) Fixed 486 days 6 hours ago
No need for whole article to b posted as summary
Reported by: sak500
Bad Editing: (486 days 13 hours ago ) Fixed 486 days 6 hours ago
Hey man, shorten the description WAY down!
Reported by: kevco33
Bad Editing: (486 days 19 hours ago ) Fixed 486 days 6 hours ago
First, summarize. You only need to have 1-2 paragraphs to give a quick summary. If the reader is interested, they'll click the link.

Second, who is "I"? Change to site name or quote source.
Reported by: Columbo