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(543 days 11 hours ago ) Fixed 543 days 9 hours ago
A good story that breaks the rules with the explanation points.
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(543 days 11 hours ago ) Fixed 543 days 9 hours ago
Three exclamation marks is a little excessive. Try using three fewer.
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Bad Editing:
(543 days 12 hours ago ) Fixed 543 days 9 hours ago
do not use exclamation marks
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Bad Editing:
(543 days 12 hours ago ) Fixed 543 days 9 hours ago
No exclamation marks in the title.
Title should read "New Killzone 2 Website Is Live"
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