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Bad Editing:
(696 days 2 hours ago )
Your entire descriptor sentence needs a lot of work. It should be something like "Best Buy of Canada have a new bundle with Spider-Man 3, Ghost Recon: Advanced Warfighter 2 and Tom Clancy's Rainbow Six Vegas for $399.99."
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Bad Spelling:
(696 days 2 hours ago )
bunndle should be bundle
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Bad Spelling:
(696 days 4 hours ago )
In title:
--'best buy' should be capitalized.
--'bunddle' is properly spelled "bundle".
--'Games' should not be capitalized
In body:
--'BestBuy' should have a space in between 'Best' and 'Buy'.
--'bunddle' is properly spelled "bundle".
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