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Other:
(707 days 16 hours ago )
Do we really need all the site detail, author name & date? it's at source and no one's interested anyway. It's unnecessary & it clutters up the description, looks confusing & messy when viewed on front pages, particularly without punctuation as it follows on straight into your description when you click out of this view. 'Siliconera writes:' is perfectly adequate.
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Bad Editing:
(707 days 17 hours ago ) Fixed 707 days 16 hours ago
Double colons in first line & You need punctuation after the first line because it smashes straight into the description when viewed in situ.
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